Speechless...
Wow. I love it now. Very good story. You wrote it?
The only thing I could say is that you can make the graphics yet even better and make it look as awesome as the story, and maybe make the dialogues being spoken by different people (Or another voice tone) for Emmeline and the maid...
Wow...seriously. I am speechless. Thanks god this is a writen review.
You're now into my favorite. n_n